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Kami Kami no Mi Model: Raijin

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Kami Kami no Mi Model: Raijin

Post by Makai Kasai on Sat Mar 26, 2011 1:04 pm

Name of Devil Fruit: Kami Kami no mi Model: Raijin

Type of Devil Fruit: Mythical Zoan

Devil Fruit Appearance: The Kami Kami no Mi Model: Raijin before being eaten takes the form of an oval shaped white fruit with a long stem with dark red leaves. Along the fruit it has grooves in the form fo lightning bolts running all along its length from top to bottom taking the form of a lightning storm.

What character is this fruit for?: Makai Kasai - Make him after i do my fruit

Has your character already been created and accepted?: Not made yet

How your character came to possess the fruit: Makai came upon this fruit when he was only five years of age having been training by himself in the forest. Having been hungry and there being nothing else around to eat he plucked the fruit from its tree and consumed it regardless of how horrible it tasted to him.

Ability Description:

The Kami Kami no Mi Model Raijin is a Rare Zoan class fruit that when it is used allows those that have eaten it to become an entity or pure lightning to be able to call forth lightning from the sky and to generate it in an instant as such the name Kami Kami no mi Model: Raijin as it makes them appear to be the God of Lightning. If it can be down with electricty or lightning this fruit can perform it when at fully transformed state.

Natural Form: In the users regular form they are offered slight abilities from there fruit allowing them to create electrical currents from there body to perform lightning based attacks

Hybrid Mode: In this form lightning encases the users entire body like armour allowing them to generate powerful lightning based attacks even use the lightning to shape it into weapons

Full transformation: In this form the user turns into a fifteen foot entity of raw lightning they are able to create magnetic fields and call forth real lightning from the sky. They can generate powerful electrical storms with a click of a finger using lightning as if it was there play toy. In this state when the user is attacked there body merely seperates into lightning and reform. This form when it is deactived the longer the user was in it they will be struck by there own electricty damaging them. After the user hits 10 posts once they deactive the technique after they go beyond ten posts they will be struck the power of the fruit.

(describe exactly what is granted to the character thanks to the Devil Fruit as far as what it does exactly. for instance, Luffy can stretch his body like rubber, etc.)

Abilities given by the fruit:

Kami Kami no mi Model Raijin: Rairyuu Uchiwake-ken (God God Fruit Model God of Lightning: Lightning Dragons Break down Fist): Is a technique using the Kami Kami no mi Model: Raijin. The user will encase one of there arms in electricty creating a large fist of electricty. They will punch mid air and shoot the massive fist to strike the enemy with enough force to break bones it also has the potential to paralyse.

Kami Kami no mi Model Raijin: Rairyū Hōtengeki (God God Fruit Model God of Lightning: Lightning Dragons Heavenward Halberd): Using the Kami Kami no mi Model; Raijin the person that ate the fruit will create a large halberd made of lightning in there hand. THey will grip the halberd and throw it with enough force to pierce human flesh and even metal walls.

Kami Kami no mi Model Raijin: Reijingu Boruto (God God Fruit Model God of Lightning: Raging Bolt): The person who consumked the Kami kami no Mi Model Raijin will generate raw lightning in the palm of there hands and shoot it upwards in the sky before it comes crashing down in the form of a giant lightning bolt on there enemies with enough power to give third degree burns and damage internal organs.

Kami Kami no mi Model Raijin: Raitoningu sattō (God God Fruit Model: God of Lightning: Lightning Stampede): using the powers of the Kami kami no mi model Raijin devil fruit the consumer will channel lightning to there head to create a large pair of bull horns. They will charge forward and can extend the horns to pierce through the target and to release a high power shock to them.

Kami Kami no mi Model Raijin: Kaminari honryū (Lightning Torrent): Using the Raijin devil fruit the consumer will channel lightning to their finger tips and shoot ten powerful bolts of lightning that can cause third degree burns

Kami Kami no mi Model Raijin: Byakurai (God God Fruit Model God of Lightning: Pale Lightning): Using the powers of the Kami kami no Mi Model Raijin the consumer will channel lgihtning to the tip of there right or left index finger and fire off a powerful concentrated bolt of lightning with enough power to pierce through human flesh with ease.

Kami Kami no mi Model Raijin: Kaminari Den (Lightning Palace): Using the Kami Kami no mi Model Raijin the consumer will release ten bolts of lightning into the air and mold them into ten spheres of lightning energy. These spheres can then be controlled and sent out to release bolts of lightning each orb can fire up to ten bolts of lightning before being destroyed.

Kami Kami no mi Model Raijin: Denki sukin (Electrical Skin): Is an ability granted by the Kami Kami no Mi Model Raijin to the consumer. THis ability allows it so the user can not be harmed by lightning except the effect of deactiving the final form. This allows them to be able to use there powers easily while in natural form and not being hurt.

Kami Kami no mi Model Raijin: Kaminari hōden (Lightning Discharge): If the consumer of the Kami Kami no mi mOdel Raijin is struck by an electrical attack or by lightning they can send all that electricty right back into the ground by bringing it into their right hand and placing their hand on the ground.

Kami Kami no mi Model Raijin: Gyaku ni kaminari (Lightning release: Lightning Reverse): If the consumer of the Kami Kami no mi mOdel Raijin is struck by an electrical attack or by lightning they can bring that electrical energy to one of their hands and send it right towards there enemy or back at them but twice as strong.

(The following five i can probably turn into actual techniques invented by my character)

Kami Kami no mi Model Raijin: Kaminari no hōkō (Roar of Thunder): Is a unique style of fighting that can be sued with the kami kami no mi Model Raijin. This style of fighting allows them to use there powers to perform lightning or electrical charge based hand to hand combat attacks.

Kami Kami no mi Model Raijin: Kobushi o inazuma (Lightning Fist): Is a technique used with the Kami Kami no mi Model Raijin: Kaminari no hōkō fighting style. Channeling lightning into there fist they consumer will deliver a brutal punch to the enemy and release the stored of lightning or electrical charge sending it right through the targets body to double the pain from the hit.

Kami Kami no mi Model Raijin: Naibu kaminari (Internal Lightning): This is a technique used with the Kaminari no Houko. Using this the consumer of the Raijin devil fruit with channel lightning into the tips of there fingers and perform rapid taps to the enemies body releaisng jolts of electricty to attack there interal organs and nerve system.

Kami Kami no mi Model Raijin: Sandā no shūen (Thunder Demise): This is a technique in the fighting style Kaminaro no Houkou. When used the consumer of the Raijin Zoan devil fruit will channel lightning into there knees or elbows. They will then rapidly attack the enemy sending numerous jolts of electricty coursing through there body increasing the damage from the hits.

Kami Kami no mi Model Raijin: Kaminari Arashi (Lightning Storm):The consumer of the Kami Kami no mi Model Raijin will channel lightning throughout there body to perform a technique used in the Kaminari no Houko. The consumer will rush there opponent using the lightning to enhance there body to deliver powerful and fast blows to there opponents body. What will appear to be one strike will actually be ten thanks to the increase of speed from the lightning. They will deliver a barrage of hits releasing electricty into the opponents body aiming for their nerve system and organs to damage and destroy them each strike is capable of leaving third to second degree burns on the opponents flesh.


Weakness: When in the full transformation state when the user goes over 10 posts once they deactive there form they will be struck by a powerful bolt of lightning that will deal high damage to them depending on how many psots they were in the form after ten. if they go ten over there nearly dead after fifteen over when deactived they are dead as the devil fruit kills them.

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Re: Kami Kami no Mi Model: Raijin

Post by SwordBitter on Sat Mar 26, 2011 8:02 pm

Too much ability, you are only given 5 free technique and the rest you will have to pay for it so i would suggest you remove some here first and later in time, submit them as custom technique(tho those ability you stated here are not cannon, it still counts toward custom. you will need to submit it before actually using it in battle/mission)

- I still don't get what's your weakness are referring.. what is '' 10 post '' part. if you would put like '' wind / lava ' as weakness it will be much more better.



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